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Top 10 E-mail Subject Lines Final Results

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Hey Folks,

I ranked every single headline that I wrote in 2008 for open rate percentage.

I thought you might be interested in the results.

Here are the top 10 Open Rate E-Mail Subject Lines for 2008:

  1. [firstname], here’s your results
  2. [firstname], Unbelieveable! Have you ever thought of this one?
  3. [firstname], do you know of any date conflicts?
  4. [firstname], finally I have dates for you.
  5. [firstname], Maybe we should rethink what we are doing together.
  6. [firstname], have some bad news about Andy
  7. [firstname], what did you decide?
  8. [firstname], have to warn you about someone … reluctantly
  9. [firstname], here’s my response
  10. [firstname], I heard you were frustrated

To make things even more interesting I sent out the results to a sub-set of my lists in a split test with 3 different subject lines.

  • Bad news,[firstname]
  • Good news, [firstname]
  • Good and bad news, [firstname]

Looks like “good and bad” beats “bad” which beats “good.”

The final rankings are:

  1. Good and bad news, [firstname]
  2. Bad news,[firstname]
  3. Good news, [firstname]

So what does all this mean?

Well NONE of those last three subject lines even came close to beating any of my top-ten despite Frank Kern’s recommendation for a great e-mail subject line.

Beware of reading TOO much into top 10 lists!

Statistics are a way that writers and speakers try to present evidence.

By quoting actual numbers in support of their ideas and conclusions they become more credible.

Many times those statistics are accepted at face value as the final word in what’s actually fact.

Why do they do this — and why should you?

If you throw enough statistics at people, most people won’t refute your ideas.

But …

There are problems with using statistics as evidence.

Whenever your are asked to believe a set of statistics, you need to ask with a critical eye:

  • Who generated the statistics?
  • What are the statistics measuring?
  • Who did they ask?
  • When did they do the study?
  • What happened before and after the study?
  • What are they comparing?
  • What are they trying to prove?

You can find numbers in support of just about any idea.

That’s what debates are all about!

It’s your job to examine as many statistics as you can find that support DIFFERENT points of view. INCLUDING mine and Frank Kern’s.

That way you can arrive at your own conclusions based on all of them.

Then why not do your own study and see what works for you.

By the way …

Surveys are AMAZINGLY Inaccurate!

Here’s something you probably won’t dispute.

People are inconsistent.

You may like ice cream today and spinach tomorrow.

Try eating ice cream as your only food for a month.  It SOUNDS good for the first few days, it won’t be long until it’s nauseating.

Also remember people MANY times don’t know what they want or even more often can’t tell you why.

In fact, if you are like me even if you know something … you can’t remember!

Then there’s a little thing called “prestige bias.”

That’s when our pride, self-esteem and self-image get involved in our answers.

“Prestige Bias” causes inflated results anytime we think we will look better.

Then there’s looking worse!

Who wants to admit that they watch Jerry Springer?

The truth is people not only stretch the truth. They lie. Especially when they can get away with it and even if they have no real reason to do so.

Finally, lots of surveys try to find out WHY people do what they do.

The problem with that is that most people don’t know why they do things.  It’s tough to know why you eat so much and even harder to articulate it.

People who do surveys contribute their own prejudice to the gathering of facts. Most often they are trying to prove something.

So are statistics worth anything?

In 1831, during the cholera plaugue in London William Chadwick and William Farr, collected statistics about who got cholera and where they lived.

Then they looked for the source of the disease.

Statistics identified the Thames River as the source, and eventually they were able to narrow the results to a single pump that supplied water a the main source of the infection. Many lives were saved by those statistics and that’s just a single example.

So back to the top 10 e-mail subject lines …

These are actual results, not a survey, but they STILL have biases.

  • I wrote all of the subject lines
  • Other people could have written MUCH better subject lines.
  • This is my particular audience
  • They have very specific interests
  • They were used within a specific time-frame (2008)

So are these statistics useless?

Absolutely not!

There are lots of ways to gleen ideas from these results and to test how they work on YOUR audience.

Results will vary.

I’d love to hear about YOUR best e-mail subject lines and YOUR results!

Here’s hoping yours are OUTSTANDING!

All the best,

Ken McArthur
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11 Comments

  • At 2009.01.09 11:13, Demian Farnworth said:

    You are right one: People are inconsistent. [My wife points this out about me all the time.] That’s why it’s important to perpetually test. Never test once and lean on those tests…especially in this day and age.

    Thanks for the great ideas for SLs. Appreciate it much.

    Demian Farnworth’s last blog post..Is the Christian Gospel a Sick Delusion?

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      • At 2009.01.09 12:15, Tom Trush said:

        This post motivated me to check out what were some of my more successful subject lines. For whatever it’s worth, here are my top 5 from 2008:

        1. A Little Inspiration for You …
        2. How to Use Branding to Capture Prospects and Create Customers
        3. Still Not Getting Any Love from the Search Engines?
        4. How I Generated a 122.4% E-mail Open Rate
        5. Do-It-Yourself Secrets for Creating a Profitable Website or Blog

        • At 2009.01.09 12:44, Alex Sysoef said:

          Interesting results Ken,

          I’m a sucker for stats of any kind and this was a great read! Thanks for sharing.

          Alex

          Alex Sysoef’s last blog post..WordPress and Twitter Integration Guide

          • At 2009.01.09 14:18, Slavica Todorovic said:

            First i have noticed, was your addressing them in first person/directly/Did you..;Have you…/ Do you…/
            Regarding:Bad,good,bad&good,i love:Good,Bad,Evil/ha,ha,/think Clint Eastwood movie,i prefer good news!
            My experience:i didn’t track opening my subject lines,but i find they are not some special for now,everyone needs to be more curious,because you never know what there may be found.
            To me is most important to give my Articles&Book Reviews beautiful Headlines.
            I must admit,if i short in time, at first open messages with interesting Headings.

            Slavica Todorovic’s last blog post..Torrents of Spring&One lost Love

            • At 2009.01.09 14:37, Rick Falls said:

              Thanks Ken.

              I have been getting around a 30% open rate, on an IM list.

              You make some good points in the post.

              I think empathizing with your list and making them curious with open ended questions and incomplete statements is great.

              Giving your people useful tools and gifts is a good way to actually help them too, instead of just talking about it like many do.

              Frank has something when he talks about the “I have to stop and look at the accident” type of openers too.

              Over all great stuff,

              Thanks again, Rick

              • At 2009.01.10 00:51, Ray Edwards said:

                My top 3 subject lines for 2008 (based on clickthrough & profitability):

                1. can you believe this is free?
                2. here’s your download link
                3. I’ll pay half ($1,000)

                Ray Edwards’s last blog post..Adding Value Adds Profits: 21 Small Business Profit Boosters (#19)

                • At 2009.01.10 01:29, John Halderman said:

                  How did you know I’ve never watched Springer? And I have never much considerd those pictures they have in Playboy, it’s an article that catches my attention. Oh well, I guess I’m human too!

                  Trying to peg the particular pespective of people is a challenging undertaking, because it can even vary with mood.

                  But you have some good food for thought here. Of course each niche group is a little different we know that there are some words or phrases that seem to catch the attention and spark curiosity of most people.

                  Your list and the others posted here in comments are a nice resource we can use. Some may offer universal appeal and others can be looked at for their emotional appeal and alterd as needed.

                  Good info.

                  John

                  John Halderman’s last blog post..One Excited Video Queen Cracks The Door On Video Marketing

                  • At 2009.01.19 15:39, Andrew (Andy Jackson) said:

                    Now… why did it have to be bad news about ANDY? …

                    6. [firstname], have some bad news about Andy

                    • At 2009.01.21 09:54, Kirsty Meynell said:

                      Hi Ken,

                      I’m a newbie to your blog and arrived thanks to Ed Rivis.

                      Love the top ten and your analysis of why it may or may not be a good list to take notice of definitely appealed to my logical brain!
                      I’ll look forward to reading more posts.
                      Thanks
                      Kirsty
                      Check out my blog at http://www.blog.write-works.com

                      • At 2009.01.23 02:18, Crazy J said:

                        Hi Ken,

                        Thanks for that Top Ten List.
                        I have to admit that those were definately some of the mails I opened.

                        I would be interested in finding out which were the top 10 Hated E-Mail Subject Lines e.g.

                        1.”hey…”
                        2.”You have recieved a commission…” and you don’t even know their product
                        etc., etc., etc…

                        Didyou ever look at anything like that?

                        Cheers, Smiles and Success,
                        Crazy J
                        a.k.a. Johnny Hollywood
                        Comedian turned Internet Marketer

                        Crazy J’s last blog post..Want Attention? Dare to be different

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